Prompt: Write a well-constructed paragraph that compares and contrasts for the reader one of the two videos we watched yesterday. Although each dance is a different style, what similarities exist? What differences are apparent? Consider the dance vocabulary we have been using: time, space, negative space, levels, unison, non-unison, pathways, etc.
Planning: Create a Venn diagram in which to take notes as you view the videos. Watch each video at least once more.
Key Components of a Good Response:
- There is a topic sentence that restates the prompt.
- There is an awareness of audience (teacher, classmates, and community) and use proper spelling, grammar, and punctuation.
- The paragraph is 6-8 sentences long, at least.
- The paragraph allows the reader to understand the similarities and differences between the videos.
- The paragraph uses interesting words that "bump up" their vocabulary and engage the reader. These words are IN ALL CAPS. You should include at least 2 "bumped-up" words.
- You received a "mini-thesaurus" with many different descriptive words. Reference that to find words to use to enhance your vocabulary.
- This is an online reference of descriptive words from Allan Hancock College.
- Thesaurus.com
- Link to eBoard with videos: http://www2.eboard.com/eboard/servlet/BoardServlet?ACTION=NOTE_SHOW&ACTION_ON=NOTE&OBJECT_ID=5423606&SITE_NAME=newlebanoncsd&BOARD_NAME=kobrien&SESSION_ID=amuacwdrhrkwa291289&TAB_ID=621700
- You must post your response by Wednesday, February 29 at 9 P.M.
- You must respond to a classmate's post by Friday, March 2 at 9 P.M.